Judge nightfall safety
“I wish you’d let me walk you home.”
Mary looked at him, irritated. “I’m sure you mean well, ” she said, trying to conciliate him despite what she considered his over-solicitous behavior. “But I don’t turn into a helpless damsel just because it’s nightfall.”
“I don’t know that you’re the best judge of that.” James tried to convince her. “I’m only concerned about your safety.”
She ended the argument by closing the door.
* * *
Her heeltaps echoed off the walls of the deserted street. The rhythm changed, became syncopated, as another set of steps joined in, someone moving faster than she. Determining the direction was difficult, as the echoes made the steps sound as though they were behind her, in front of her, all around.
Mary slowed, listening, then paused, then began to run. She came to an abrupt halt when she catapulted into the man on the sidewalk in front of her.
“You should have let me walk with you,” James smiled, cutting off her scream as the knife descended, the first time of many. “I told you it wasn’t safe.”
Didn’t see that one coming. Nice turn of events.
Ooh – sneaky..I loved the twist in the tale..Fantastic flash! Jae
Held me in a grip all the while !! Eerie!!
I suspected there’d be an attack, but I never guessed the perpetrator. Nicely done.
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Suspenseful but I sure wasn’t expecting the ending
A surprise ending indeed! He was definitely out to get her!
Eheh, That was a very clever twist at the end. Nicely done, and it would be cool to see this expanded out.