October 19, 2010 On the Passing of the Last Brother 15 Comments Sepia faces on crumbling paper; young men gone to ashes now. 41.614756 -81.512887 Share this:TweetEmailShare on TumblrMorePrintLike this:Like Loading... Related Posted by TEC4 in Haiku, One Shot Wednesday, Poetry
don’t know why – but reminds me somehow of old pictures of young men in uniforms on their way to war..such few words but quite poignant Reply
perfect… ॐ नमः शिवाय Om Namah Shivaya Twitter: @VerseEveryDay Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/ Reply
How beautiful! I love that you have linked the photograph to their present state of ashes. Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/19/song-of-my-heart/ Reply
that was an amazing well written haiku…you said so much and created so much in so few word..well done Reply
De Mon Esprit! 
ooo…nice.
old pictures
of those that passed
stir memories
So poignant…
Impressive …
Death
be the reminder
you meant a lot to us.
don’t know why – but reminds me somehow of old pictures of young men in uniforms on their way to war..such few words but quite poignant
I had the same impression as Claudia. Beautiful and haunting.
Victoria
perfect…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/
“Luminous beings are we, not this crude matter.”
– Yoda
Nice One Shot!
I love this haiku. Great job!
Beautiful haiku. Poignant how the photograph outlasted the last brother.
Beautiful and poignant haiku.
How beautiful! I love that you have linked the photograph to their present state of ashes.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/19/song-of-my-heart/
Great haiku!
that was an amazing well written haiku…you said so much and created so much in so few word..well done
Well done for packing so much into so few words. Exceptional.
Familiar tale, well told in solid/brief verse.